Feedback from final draft of title sequence

When we showed our improved title sequence to the class everyone thought it was much better. They liked the colour of the typography and he changes we made to the final scenes. They also thought it looked much better without the bus scene at the beginning. However, The new shots we did they thought was too dark, even with the brightness change. They also thought the lift scene's were slightly out of place. What we plan to do now is to re-shoot these scenes on Monday so we can edit before the ultimate deadline on Thursday.